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Flowers are gorgeous,

And they should be treated right.

I felt gorgeous, too.


When someone says to

Treat something right, they mean that

It should be taken


Very good care of.

Flowers should have the backs of

Other flowers, and 


Make sure they're okay.

A rose should help a daisy

If a human tries


To trample on her

And destroy what makes her safe.

Humans can be harsh.


When a rose does not

Have the back of a daisy,

The daisy can be


Hurt in a way that

She can never fully heal

From, and that's tragic.


The rose did her best

To save the daisy, but she

Slipped up for a split


Second, and the man

Was able to inflict pain

To the daisy that


She may never come

To fully heal. The daisy

Does not blame the rose.


It is sad flowers

Are required to have each

Others' backs to stay


Safe from men when they

Are in such a public place,

But that is the case.

Comments

  1. Bethany3:10 PM

    I loved how you used haikus to format you blog post. I also like how you gave the perspective of flowers being in it together and supporting each other as much as possible. Both of those elements add a cool uniqueness to the blog post that I thoroughly enjoyed.

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  2. Andy Pham3:55 PM

    Quite the unique and interesting way of creating a blog. I feel that I wasn't able to fully grasp the message, probably due to me not being the best at English, but I thoroughly enjoyed reading this.

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